2012년 1월 10일 화요일

Chain Writing (+metafiction)

Mr. S was marking the essays for essay writing contest from KMLA. He found an interesting paper which the writer had same name with him, Bob. He got interested and started reading the essay with enthusiasm.

It started like this...

Many things must be stopped. First of all abbreviation in language must be stopped. Nowadays many people uses abbreviation in language. The most famous are "CU" or"LOL" which is abbreviation of see you and laugh out loud. Since so many people uses abbreviation to most of the things, people are getting confused. Sometimes when I use abbreviation speaking to my mom, she gets confused and doesn't know what I am talking about and keep asking me. Also I think abbreviation is destruction of the language. It is erasing the original meaning that it contained. 

'The first introduction is quite okay...' Mr. S said and he continued to read.

Abbreviation made our communication hard to understand and destroying Han-Gul words own features. If we keep using abbreviation maybe here will be no our own words but only strange words will left. Then who will be using these abbreviation? It is mostly by students. Students or young teens wants to make long word shorter to pronounce easier. Also, it looks more nicer if we use abbreviation. For example, elevator in elva or teacher to Ssam. Well it is okay to use it but if we keep using it,it will be bad. 


I believe that KMLA should be aware of abbreviation mostly because KMLA is "Korean Minjok Leadership Academy" We need to keep Korea's original word. Like such, we have to keep Korea's tradition. To keep it, we should stop EOP because it can damage our love to Korean.(?)


And all English academies will be perish! All!!!! And we should say "Every people in earth,you have to use Korean!" so every company and school should teach Korean. And they will have Korean Academies.

"Huh?" He said. " That's kind of off topic!!"


However there are some positive sides of abbreviation. Some teenagers can make their own world and share their things. Not only for the teenagers, it can be good for the adults in some way. They can save their time writing full words or sentences. 


Like such, we should find the other way to shorten time and stop the abbreviation. 

Mr. S finished reading and he gave the score of B. It was not a bad score but it wasn't very good either. He felt that he should mention the student to kind of go into topic.


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Metafiction
Vanessa 
Ye Won
Christine
DoKyung
Ji Woo


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Through chain writing, I learned that one simple topic can lead to other serious topics and also that one that can be a problem can have positive aspect too. 



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